My major is Information Management; I learned many skills of computer and business knowledge in my campus life. I am interested in computer science.
When I was a junior high school student, I had a computer which process speed was very slow. But I learned a lot of basic computer technology from my computer. In the junior high school, my computer teacher taught me how to edit a homepage by using HTML and how to setup a computer. I was so interested in computer; therefore after junior high school, I choose Data Process as my major in vocational high school.
When I was going to graduate from vocational high school, I had to think about the future; what is my next major? I wanted to learn more knowledge, skill and technology. My parents supported me to make the decision, "You should choose what you like", they said. Without a doubt, I choose Information Management to be my major. Fortunately, I was admitted to NTUST by screening test. I am glad that I can study in Information Management in NTUST.
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Your paragraph is order of time, I can easy to know every stage in your school life why did you choose your major, good!
I know you chose Information Management became your major becaust you are interested in CS and you chose what you like, but Can you tell us more detail about what kind of business knowledge or computer skills make you feel interestiog.
In the second part, "But I learned a lot of basic computer technology from my computer. {In the junior high school,} my computer teacher taught me how to edit a homepage by using HTML..." {In the junior high school,} this sentence you may change to [For example,] because in beginning of this part I know you are talking about your junior high school life.
Glad to read it!
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Thank you, Jenny.
I think my arcticle more completely after corrected.
Thank you for your suggestions.
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